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Sunset Skyline

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:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Now I like this photo much better then the first one I critiqued for you. I like the silhouette and the colors. But there are ways to really improve this photo. First is composition. You really got to use your rule of thirds here. We have this nice sky and to much black at the bottom that doesn't show anything. Plus your tree was cut off on the top. Would have been much better to shoot a little higher. This would get rid of the excessive silhouette and added more of that nice rich sky. The other would be to edit out the power lines in the background. Just those two simple things is the difference between this photo getting highly unnoticed and going viral on something like 500px.. Hope this helps..